I've told you already, but it bears reiterating: I <3 this, so much.
She wasn’t supposed to meet him until that date in the future Oh Ten, you're already thinking about it subconsciously, aren't you? ;)
Yay Harry and the Brig mentions!
Good thing the devil of a cat didn't interfere with Sarah's seduction, perhaps this is proof that the cat isn't an diabolical alien.
He looked back at her, very much like a deer caught in the headlights. Finally, she stopped a few paces away and placed her hands on her hips. I think this sums up the entire situation perfectly.
Hee, I like that you have the Jude Johnson scene from Sarah's POV.
The Doctor is adorkable and fails at these silly human notions of romance/lust/removal of clothing.
Any awkwardness she attributed to his probable scientific profession. Oh come now, that's just a tad unfair isn't it? Perhaps he just attended a certain University we're both familiar with.
Sarah Jane Smith, it read. A force to be reckoned with he realised, and not for the first time. And don't you forget it, Doctor!
I fancy myself a bit of traveler at times. Not to mention a traveler of times ;)
Got the job, after all, and I can’t just go and leave whenever I want.” He's bs'ing, as usual, but I wonder if this is a sort of half-truth and a passive-aggressive dig at certain companions who leave him.
And let me just say that I love the entire first kiss part rather than pasting 5+ paragraphs :D Or rather the entire story.
“I think, Jude, that we’re both in firm need of a shag right now.” *dies of shock and laughter*
“Best night of your life, Sarah Jane Smith.” Between this and the awkward fumbling you've captured Ten fabulously.
Hee, oh dear, I wonder how she reacts when she figures it out (or maybe she has by the time she finds the TARDIS). I dare you to rewatch the episode with the mindset that SJ knows it was him. It would be interesting what happens once they meet up again, after both have experienced this.
All in all, love that you filled out when the Doctor gives SJ K-9 and the execution of the story.
can it be OOC if there's no C?
She wasn’t supposed to meet him until that date in the future
Oh Ten, you're already thinking about it subconsciously, aren't you? ;)
Yay Harry and the Brig mentions!
Good thing the devil of a cat didn't interfere with Sarah's seduction, perhaps this is proof that the cat isn't an diabolical alien.
He looked back at her, very much like a deer caught in the headlights. Finally, she stopped a few paces away and placed her hands on her hips.
I think this sums up the entire situation perfectly.
Hee, I like that you have the Jude Johnson scene from Sarah's POV.
The Doctor is adorkable and fails at these silly human notions of romance/lust/removal of clothing.
Any awkwardness she attributed to his probable scientific profession.
Oh come now, that's just a tad unfair isn't it? Perhaps he just attended a certain University we're both familiar with.
Sarah Jane Smith, it read. A force to be reckoned with he realised, and not for the first time.
And don't you forget it, Doctor!
I fancy myself a bit of traveler at times.
Not to mention a traveler of times ;)
Got the job, after all, and I can’t just go and leave whenever I want.”
He's bs'ing, as usual, but I wonder if this is a sort of half-truth and a passive-aggressive dig at certain companions who leave him.
And let me just say that I love the entire first kiss part rather than pasting 5+ paragraphs :D Or rather the entire story.
“I think, Jude, that we’re both in firm need of a shag right now.”
*dies of shock and laughter*
“Best night of your life, Sarah Jane Smith.”
Between this and the awkward fumbling you've captured Ten fabulously.
Hee, oh dear, I wonder how she reacts when she figures it out (or maybe she has by the time she finds the TARDIS). I dare you to rewatch the episode with the mindset that SJ knows it was him. It would be interesting what happens once they meet up again, after both have experienced this.
All in all, love that you filled out when the Doctor gives SJ K-9 and the execution of the story.